Homework Week 6,7

I did about 15 drafts , but i can only clean up 7 lines . there are lot of things to improve for the 2 characters below , but i chose the one on the bottom right corner to move on , cause i'm not familiar on the expression of this one , trying to get more learning things from it .
I had no idea about how hard the next journey that i'm going through in the next weeks ...